PEER EDITING EXERCISE

 

1.     Exchange papers with a partner and identify the following.

a.     ¥ Strong imagery

b.     ¥ Complex sentences

c.      ¥ Words with correct connotations (happy/sad)

 

2. Create a key to identify each. For example, box strong images,
underline complex sentences and circle words with correct connotations.

 

2.     Answer the following questions:

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a.     ¥ What is the strongest image withing the description?

b.     ¥ What is the most complex sentence within the description?

c.      ¥ What is the best word in the entire description?

 

3.     Identify the following:

a.     ¥ Telling or neutral words

b.     ¥ Words with incorrect connotations

c.      ¥ Simple vs. complex sentences

 

5, Again create a key to identify each. For example, cross out telling or neutral words
and words with incorrect connotations, and [bracket] simple sentences.

 

6. Answer the following questions:

¥ What are the telling or neutral words?

¥ What words have incorrect connotations?

¥ What sentence should absolutely be revised?